For every girl child, there seemed to lurk a dead-eyed man, hair receding prematurely, with a car and the offer of a lift and a plan and a knife an
For every girl child, there seemed to lurk a dead-eyed man, hair receding prematurely, with a car and the offer of a lift and a plan and a knife and a shovel. Did we create the man by imagining him or was he idling there in his car regardless?
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None of us can escape who we are when others aren’t looking; we can’t guess what we’re capable of until it’s too late.
Durton, New South Wales, 2001, the hottest November ever. Twelve-year-old Esther Bianchi has gone missing somewhere between school and home. Authorities are alerted, and a search is on. Her bff, Ronnie, believes that Esther has not met a dark end, and is determined to find her.
[image] Hayley Scrivenor - image from Writer Interviews blogspot
Durton is not exactly a garden spot, although a suggestive apple does put in an appearance. It is a secondary town, to a secondary city, a drive west from Sydney measured in double-digit hours. While there may be some appealing qualities to the place, what comes across about Durton is that it is the back end of nowhere, a physical manifestation of isolation, and thus a fitting image for the isolation experienced by its residents, albeit not quite actual outback. It is a place where there are some who are, wrongfully, ashamed of who they are, and there are some others who should be. The main exports of Durton appear to be fear, pain, abuse, and despair. The local kids call it Dirt Town, which is the title of the book in Australia. The name fits. Not sure why it was retitled Dirt Creek for its North American release.
The action begins on Tuesday, December 4, 2001, with the discovery of a body. Then it goes back to Friday, November 30, tracking the events that led up to that discovery, and continues for a few days beyond. Over the course of these days, we follow Ronnie Thompson and Lewis Kennard, Esther’s mates, Constance Bianchi, Esther’s mother, and Detective Sergeant Sarah Michaels, the detective assigned the case, as they try to figure out where Esther is, and what happened to her, if anything. Ronnie is a first-person narrator, so we get a good close look at her. The Lewis, Constance, and Sarah chapters are in third person, but we still get a pretty good sense of what is going on inside them. The unusual element here is the presence of a first-person Greek chorus, speaking in the voices of children, and offering an omniscient view of the goings on.
I started a PhD in creative writing in 2016. It can be dangerous to ask me about collective narration because my research project looked at novels that had Greek chorus-like narration, and I can go on a bit. But I do have a clear sense of where Dirt Town the novel started. I sat down to write a short story from the point of view of the children of a small town, kind of like the one where I had grown up. What I wrote was largely just these kids coming home from school, but there was an energy in it that made me think it could be a novel. That writing is still in the book, pretty much as it was written. It occurred to me that if I was in these kids’ heads, then I needed something for them all to be looking at, thinking about: an experience that was as big as the town. One of the next flashes I had was that a girl had died, and the story grew from there. - from the Books and Publishing interview
Durton is a close-knit community in a way. Shelly McFarlane, for example, is best friends with Constance Bianchi, Esther’s mother. Shelly’s husband, Peter, is brother to Ronnie Thompson’s mother. There are more, but the connections in Durston occupy a place higher than purely communal, but less than purely familial. And yet, there are many ways to be, or to feel, alone. Constance is English-born, but married a local, and feels very out of place, as the cowboy-ish appeal of her handsome husband has faded under the weight of experience. Lewis has a secret that makes him feel very alone and vulnerable. Sarah must contend with her recent, nasty, breakup with her partner. There are abused people here, who are afraid to tell anyone, lest they suffer even more, given how ineffective or feckless law enforcement has been about such things. This includes a long-ago rape that was never brought to justice. As a part of this, people wonder if they have somehow brought their misery down on themselves, which, of course, only adds to their feelings of isolation. What makes them different also makes them feel alone.
The story moves forward in a moistly straight line, after the initial jump back. There is a bit of history on occasion, for backstory, and there is overlap as different POVs occur simultaneously, reporting events Rashomon-style.
The mystery unravels at a comfortable pace, with clues being presented, conversations being had, and determinations being made about whether this or that connects to the missing girl. There is other criminality going on in Durton that may or may not be related, and there is a pair of missing twins not too far away, whose fate may or may not have anything to do with Esther’s.
The characters are sympathetic and appealing, which makes us eager to keep flipping pages to see if they are ok, in addition to wanting to find out what actually happened. There are the usual number of red herrings flopping about in the bucket. The fun of the clues is trying to figure out which are germane to Esther’s disappearance and which are intended to throw us off the scent. There is also a fair bit about life in Australia, this part of it, anyway. The most interesting element of the novel for me was the Greek chorus. It took a while to figure out who comprised it. That puzzle was fun, too. And the chorus offers a tool for exposition, which worked pretty well.
Overall, I found this an enjoyable, well, considering the subject matter, engaging read, with interesting characters and a mystery that Scrivenor draws you in to trying to solve. Dirt Creek is an excellent Summer entertainment, good, clean reading pleasure.
We are not sure if it was our childhood or just childhood in general that has made us the way we are.
Hayley Scrivenor is a former Director of Wollongong Writers Festival. Originally from a small country town, Hayley now lives and writes on Dharawal country and has a PhD in Creative Writing from the University of Wollongong on the south coast of New South Wales. Dirt Town (our Book of the Month for June!) is her first novel. An earlier version of the book was shortlisted for the Penguin Literary Prize and won the Kill Your Darlings Unpublished Manuscript Award.
Tiny Q/A I wondered why Scrivenor had set her story in 2001 and if there were any particular significances to her characters’ names, so I asked, on her site. She graciously replied.
The simple answer to the setting question is that the character of Ronnie is twelve in 2001, and so was I - so it helped me keep my timeline straight!
For the names query, she referred me to an interview in which some of the name considerations are addressed. Here is her response from there:
I spent quite a bit of time thinking about the names of characters. Some have been the same almost since the start: Veronica, the missing girl’s best friend, goes by ‘Ronnie’, and that always felt absolutely right for her character. The character of Lewis, a young boy who sees Esther after she’s supposed to have gone missing, gets called ‘Louise’ by his classmates, I had to reverse-engineer a name that kids could play with in that way. Sometimes, names can become a little in-joke with yourself, too. There is a character named ‘Constance’, who is the mother of the missing girl. I called her Constance because she changes her mind a lot, over the course of the story.
All across this vast country they were burning, as they had for a hundred years, all lit by men like Noone. So many dead in the ashes, thousands of
All across this vast country they were burning, as they had for a hundred years, all lit by men like Noone. So many dead in the ashes, thousands of them, scattered over the colonies, never to be found, the wind tossing their remains like a plaything, and teasing the dust off their bones.
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“…memories can be slippery as fish, in my experience. Once you have them out of the water, it pays to get them good and clubbed.”
In 2018, Paul Howarth’s first published novel, Only Killers and Thieves introduced much of the world to a dark chapter in Australian history. Queensland in the 1880s, Billy and Tommy McBride’s parents are murdered. A former employee, an aboriginal, is blamed. A posse is organized to hunt down the accused and any with him. It is led by Edmund Noone, an officer of the Queensland Native Police, who is in the business of eradicating native people, crime or no crime. Billy and Tommy are dragged along for what turns out to be a massacre, soiling their lives, and polluting their souls.
[image] Paul Howarth - image from HarperCollins.com - Photo by Sarah Howarth
In Howarth’s compelling sequel, Dust Off The Bones, we follow the McBride boys, adults in 1890, on diverging paths, as they cope with the aftermath of what had happened. Tommy McBride is 19, bigger now, brawny even, working as a stockman, far from his ravaged home. His conscience, PTSD, and fear of Noone bedeviling him, Tommy tries to lay low. Noone had told the McBride brothers that they were never to see each other again, or he would kill them. Tommy is abiding by that order, living his life. But his recurring nightmares, with considerable thrashings-about, freak out the men he works with. The foreman is a bully straight from the build-a-creep store, eager to issue unfulfillable commands, and unnaturally excited to inflict punishments. One thing leads to another, and Tommy and his aboriginal friend, Arthur, are wanted men, on the run.
Billy, 21, has married the girl of his dreams and gained considerable property and responsibility in the bargain. But it is not the paradise he expected. When we see him again, some years later, he is still troubled by the men who are working for the farm, for his wife, for him, who show him no respect. He indulges in public displays of prosperity, as the lands that he married into have been productive. But he calms his conscience—or is it his fear of being found out?—with excessive supplies of alcohol. Where Tommy has grown big, and strong, Billy has grown large and soft.
Never far from the thoughts of either is Edmund Noone, the terrifying leader of that fateful expedition. He is now established as local police chief in Southport, a coastal suburb of Brisbane.
Along with the story of the McBride brothers, Dust Off the Bones focuses on how state-sanctioned authorities provided legal support to a national campaign of genocide. Without accountability, no wrongs will be punished, and without the threat of punishment, those wrongs will persist. It also shines a light on the rights of women in the early 20th century. These elements are highlighted in chapters featuring Henry Wells and Katherine Sullivan (now McBride). The story is told primarily through the alternating POVs of Billy and Tommy, with Wells and Katherine adding several chapters each.
I’m British-Australian, but was largely ignorant about Australia’s settlement history and the role Britain played, so was reading about the frontier period for my own interest at first, and became intrigued by this alternative Wild West that played out against the stunning Australian landscape but which remains comparatively unknown, both at home and overseas, and is still relatively under-explored in fiction or film. I was also seeing a lot of relevance in that history to the world today, not just in Australia but in the USA and Europe too. Then as I began to try to write about the period I came across information about the infamous Queensland Native Police—and that was the spark that really set this novel in motion. - from the More2Read interview
Wells is an attorney. It is through his eyes that we see the racism inherent in the Aussie legal system of the time. It will feel quite familiar to many who track prosecutions of civilian-killing police here in the states over a century later. Legal atrocities compound the physical atrocities, in which monsters with state authority carry out genocide, and woe to any who oppose them. When a witness to the massacre, to which the McBrides were a party, files a report, Wells sees his chance to bring the big man down. It is this attempt that induces much of the action that follows.
Katherine Sullivan, the young widow of an unspeakable husband, remains the owner of a considerable property, and of Billy McBride’s heart. After fending off an attempt by her father to all but sell her to yet another unspeakable man, she marries Billy, instead. But it is not a marriage made in heaven. Her passion for Billy softens with the years, along with Billy’s frame. But she still must contend with a world run by men, a world in which women do not have the full rights to even their own property.
We make stops at several points in time. The first, a brief one, is in 1885, when Rev Francis Bean sees something he cannot forget. When he informs the local magistrate, he is threatened with certain death at the hands of Noone, should he file an official report. The main action takes place in 1890 and 1897, showing how the brothers have diverged, and then in 1906 when everything comes to a head.
There is a fair amount of blood spilled. A lot of it is done off camera, thankfully. But the tension is palpable as danger approaches and we wonder with every rapidly turned page whether, in this instance, evil will triumph.
Gripes – I had hoped that the towering figure of Edmund Noone would be given a bit more depth in this sequel, but he remains a pure black hat (ironically). Added to the black-hat team is his criminally able and amoral assistant, a one-dimensional crooked judge, and the creep Tommy encounters. They function well as manifestations of bigotry, corruption, and cruelty, not so well as rounded characters. There are some good people in the book as well, lest one think it is all darkness.
Billy and Tommy are interesting characters, and tracing how they cope with the challenges they face, or fail to, makes for an engaging read. The history depicted here is horrific, albeit not singular in the world. For most of us it is news. There are good guys to cheer for, and baddies to boo. You will learn something, and have your blood pressure raised. It is a sad thing that Howarth’s tales are based on actual Australian history, but a good thing that he has brought that dark time into the light for so many readers. Dust off your favorite reading chair and settle your bones in for spell. Dust Off The Bones is a wonderful book.
Henry collected his bags, started for the door, then paused with his back to the two men. He wanted to say something, to have the last word. Ask the magistrate how he lived with himself, how he was able to sleep at night. There was no point. Nothing he could do or say would change anything, not in a town like this. They all lived with themselves quite comfortably here. They all managed to sleep just fine.
Review posted – June 5, 2021
Publication dates ----------Hardcover - June 8, 2021 ----------Trade paperback - June 7, 2022
Interview -----More2Read - Interview with Paul Howarth On Writing by Lou Pendergrast – this was done re Only Killers and Thieves, but still applies here.
The guilt is collective, the responsibility shared. In a hundred years no one will even remember what happened here and certainly no one will care.
The guilt is collective, the responsibility shared. In a hundred years no one will even remember what happened here and certainly no one will care. History is forgetting. Afterward we write the account, the account becomes truth, and we tell ourselves it has always been this way, that others were responsible, that there was nothing we could have done.
Australia, 1885, drought-stricken central Queensland. The McBrides struggle to scratch a living from their parcel of land, raising bony cattle, and listening, always listening for the siren song of rain. Tommy (14) and Billy (16) are out hunting a bit too far afield, for something, anything, to add to the family menu when they see the local bigshot, John Sullivan, his assistant, and some native troopers engaged in a nefarious activity. The boys’ father had warned them about staying away from Sullivan’s land. But their witness sparks a tragic sequence of events that leads the boys on a life-altering quest for vengeance, led by none other than the untrustworthy Mr. Sullivan.
Colonial Oz has a lot in common with the westward expansion of the United States. Not least among these similarities are a sere landscape, and thus challenges for any seeking to make a living from the land, and the inconvenient presence of prior inhabitants. As in the USA, the locals did not fare well once the invaders set their sights on their turf. The “dispersal” of the native people is a core element of Only Killers and Thieves.
[image] Paul Howarth (and two close associates) - image from his FB page
The chief baddie here is John Sullivan, the largest local landowner, a person with no limits to his avarice and no moral qualms to guide his actions. He has brought in a team of Native Mounted Police, led by the frightening but intriguing Inspector Edmund Noone. Cop? Bounty hunter? Horseman of the apocalypse? Whatever. You do not get in this man’s way.
A crime is committed, evidence suggesting the perpetrator might be an erstwhile native employee of the McBrides. Sullivan and Noone lead a group of troopers and the two boys in pursuit.
Australia is a vast place, fodder for the imagination, like ancient maps that filled in unexplored parts of the blue with “There be dragons here.”
Father had a surveyor’s map showing their selection and the surrounding land, everything to the north, south, or east. The lines only went so far west then faded into nothingness; the interior blank.
A place where one comes face to face with physical challenges, a venue in which hard moral choices must be made, and where character, one’s personal unknown interior, is both sculpted and revealed. The landscape is a character here. It has moods and expresses itself dramatically. A dark god perhaps rendering judgment on the acts of men with sand storms that can kill in diverse way. The land also serves as a powerful external manifestation of emotional turmoil.
“Might have only dust in it,” Locke said. “We could ride right through.” “Or might not,” Noone replied. “Might be a sandstorm, blind the horses, strip the skin from your bones. You’re welcome to stay, Raymond. Please do. But the rest of you, back to that shit-pile of a house we found this afternoon. Locke began protesting but Noone didn’t wait. He turned his horse sharply, gave it both spurs; the horse bared its teeth and took off like it had been shot. Noone didn’t check who was following, though all of them did. Pushing their horses desperately, frantic backward glances as they rode. Tiny little figures on the darkening plain, the wall of earth behind them, its shadows lengthening, swallowing all before it, and gaining. Like the advance of the end of the world.
Like Cormac McCarthy, Howarth intertwines scenes of extreme horror with writing that is rapturous.
But all the imagery and content would be for nothing if we did not care about Tommy McBride. A decent young man put into indecent situations. You will love him and feel for the moral torment he endures as he works through his doubts in struggling mightily to find truth, and follow the righteous path. He is forced by dire events to grow up in a hurry.
Four days ago the world had been one way, now it was twisted another way around. He couldn’t get his bearings. Didn’t know for certain where anyone stood. What he’d always taken as definite now felt flaky as the soil on the ground.
As Tommy binds us to the story, it is Edmund Noone who captures our attention. He is an extremely dark presence, but shows moments of perception and humanity, seeing Tommy’s talents, and the failings of others. All heads turn when Noone crosses the page. He personifies the cold genocidal brutality of the west invading aboriginal Australia, carrying out the dispersal campaign through which natives were massacred, mirroring the annihilation of native peoples in the USA. This is the core point of the book. He presents his case to Tommy as stripped down truth, reminiscent of CCA Chairman Arthur Jensen reading the riot act to Howard Beale in the stunning film, Network, although with a more outback wardrobe, fewer words, and a lot less bombast. (I hear it delivered as slow burn, a la Clint Eastwood, through gritted teeth, rather than the Sinners in the Hands of an Angry God blast of the Network scene.)
“Listen,” Noone said. “Listen to me now. I’m going to tell you what will happen if we were to let that man live. He will hate us. Not only you and I personally, but all white men. He will become like a tick on the back of a beautiful horse, biting and gnawing and burrowing into the very fabric of this country we are trying to build. He will hunt us, all of us, we will never be safe in our homes. Your families, should you have them, will not be safe. Your children, your grandchildren, will not be safe. Remember, he will breed also. He will produce a dozen heirs, all with his hatred in their blood.
There are plenty of other works this book calls to mind. Lonesome Dove for the moral challenges and struggle with responsibility, Cormac McCarthy’s various works for their depiction of western violence and violation, and their richness of language, and The Son for its epic depiction of the savage displacement of one civilization by an invading other.
It is a powerful and moving portrayal of a very dark period in Australian, in human history. I cannot say how much attention this period and these atrocities receive in the local history books, but if that telling is in short supply, I hope that this book will help revive the memory. It is a time that should never be forgotten, an era of criminality on which a future was constructed. That it is Paul Howarth’s first novel is amazing, encouraging us to look forward to many future triumphs from him. Only Killers and Thieves is the first great book of 2018. You must read this.
Review – September 22, 2017
Published – February 6, 2018
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Links to the author’s Twitter and FB pages, although the FB page does not appear to have been updated since 2014. I expect there to be some on-line updating as publication date approaches.
A local magazine is referenced both in the epigram and by one of the characters being a regular reader. If you get a hankering to see what The Queenslander looked like, issues from the way back have been digitized and can be seen here.