I think the article is a very fair and balanced assessment. The more friction there is with using a device, the less it will be used. Picking up an iPhone is easy, which is why people do it all the time. Getting out the Vision Pro, the battery pack and a charger takes more effort. And if you actually want to get work done, you need to get out a keyboard and trackpad/mouse as well. That's a lot.
It also seems like a very incomplete experience at this point. Apple has so many of their own apps that are not native, including Calendar, Maps, Home, etc. It could easily use a price cut to $2995 (and give the early adopters a $500 store credit). And the lack of unlocking/mirroring the iPhone is a major pain point for me.
I love the potential of the device, and often find using it to still be amazing. But I also think it has a long way to go before anyone I know would buy one.